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Ingredients of a good acucullophiliac short story?

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Ingredients of a good acucullophiliac short story?

Postby Cufflinks » Sat Jan 27, 2018 2:58 am

Hi everyone,

having written a few of these stories now, I am observing how some seem vastly more popular than others. I would like to distill a recipe for success from that insight, and from any info you can give me on that. What is it that makes some stories so much more successful than others? What do you need to see in a story so that it really floats your boat?

Can you help me make my stories a full success, every time? Tell me what you like about the existing ones, and I'll cook up more according to that input.

Cheers.

OK, I'll go ahead with a primer then: For me, and you'll probably find this in all my stories, it is important to have a good flow, a fast story, avoiding all those cumbersome elements of peripheral description that make normal, amateur-written porn prose so awful to read. I'm basically "circumcising the words" already, haha. As for content, I try to portray the protagonist as a perfectly normal hetero guy we can all relate to - probably aged between 20 and 50, probably with a job and driving license. And I try to portray the women as experienced, attractive, even lascivious, with a cheerful and upbeat personality. I also tend to make them extremely knowledgeable about all aspects of circumcision (or, on the contrary, totally innocent of it). It is important to me that no character is ever oppressed or forced to do something against their will, and there is no place for pain and suffering in my stories. I want everyone to enjoy themselves.

But that's just me.

Maybe you agree, maybe you'd like to change or add something? Bring it on, I'm listening. Who knows, with your input, I could provide a whole new level here.
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Re: Ingredients of a good acucullophiliac short story?

Postby evadjams » Sat Jan 27, 2018 4:58 am

Appreciate your asking for feedback. For me, the more realistic, the better - I don't like it when the women read like cartoon villains.

I also like stories when the woman is almost embarrassed at her preference, but can't deny it.
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Re: Ingredients of a good acucullophiliac short story?

Postby uncut28 » Sat Jan 27, 2018 2:29 pm

I favour realism too, but I think it really depends on your fantasy wants/needs. Clearly some guys really get off on the sadistic element of forced circumcision, or the subservience element. Neither of those things really do it for me, but that's not to say you can't have a good story with those elements!

I liked elements of the 'Love Story' story that was posted on here. The woman is interested and knowledgeable, but not in an over-the-top way. She cares about her partner, but also has a strong preference she needs to act on. That's all pretty true to life.

I think the chronology is something that is variable. Most stories seem to build up to the circumcision itself and then stop pretty soon after. As I'm interested in a longer post-circumcision adjustment part. How does sex and masturbation and everything change? Also, those stories where the guy gets circumcised and immediately after the operation the woman starts fucking him are both fun to imagine and completely unbelievable. But I think there can be stories too where the guy is already circumcised and encounters a circumcision loving woman. The circumcision-in-the-story type is fun, but doesn't need to always follow that formula. You don't read so many of those though.

Maybe there are differences in preference between guys who are uncut and fantasise about being cut, and guys who are already cut along the same lines? That's an interesting discussion I think
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Re: Ingredients of a good acucullophiliac short story?

Postby Cufflinks » Sat Jan 27, 2018 3:30 pm

uncut28 wrote:Maybe there are differences in preference between guys who are uncut and fantasise about being cut, and guys who are already cut along the same lines? That's an interesting discussion I think


Thank you for your thoughtful input. That particular aspect you mention is actually very interesting - do cuts and uncuts fantasise differently? I imagine only a poll might tell.
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Re: Ingredients of a good acucullophiliac short story?

Postby uncut28 » Sat Jan 27, 2018 5:53 pm

A poll would be good! Getting a discussion going here would be good too. Anybody else have thoughts?
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Re: Ingredients of a good acucullophiliac short story?

Postby Cufflinks » Sun Jan 28, 2018 4:01 am

I could "prime" this one again.

So, "do uncircumcised men fantasize differently about acucullophiliac content than the already circumcised do?"

I can offer my own experience in that regard: Going from uncircumcised to circumcised did not change the nature of my sexual fantasies. Before and after, I have always imagined lovely women giving me the royal treatment with a bit of circ talk to go with it. What did change was my own image, in my own eyes, because I gained so much stamina as a lover that the achieved "successes" (reliably getting women off in bed just through straight sex) basically raised my self confidence to new levels. So, my fantasies started taking on a bit of a "breeding stallion" flavour, but that was the only change for me.
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Re: Ingredients of a good acucullophiliac short story?

Postby Gemlt » Sun Jan 28, 2018 1:14 pm

As a member with the perspective of having been cut as long as I remember, I'd reiterate that the actual circumcision itself has no erotic potential for me. In my own experiences, it's akin to having my umbilical cord severed, so it just doesn't have any sexual charge for me. Which is not to say that you shouldn't include it as an element in your stories. They're your stories, and you should do what you want with them.

Cufflinks wrote:So, my fantasies started taking on a bit of a "breeding stallion" flavour


The above mentality is much closer to how I feel about being cut. One of the biggest struggles in composing scenes for the custom videos that I order has been how completely banal it is to be circumcised in the part of the US where I live. Consequently, one solution has been to imagine myself in roles where it's a more exotic feature than it would be in my own culture. The themes to my fantasies have rather hackneyed origins, they might involve a transfer student from a "non-circumcising" culture glimpsing me naked and developing an obsession. Although I wouldn't really call it a coherent story, the concept of "Mr. Mogen" is essentially the reverse: a circumcised man traveling the world and enchanting the locals with his fantastic phallus.

Alternatively, I've worked a lot with the fantasy of being captured by enemies in some bygone era and being selected by their queen to serve as her "stud." Representatives of the latter can be seen in the videos made for me by the Filipina model Yaori and the Brazilian pornstar Luna Corazon. I like this story line, because I like the idea of putting the models that I work with in an empowering role without having to submit to any degrading language myself. I'm actually kind of surprised that there isn't more erotica with this theme to be found around the internet. I don't really understand why any story with a dominant female automatically has to lead to the male being humiliated and/or tortured. Unfortunately, as I've mentioned in other posts, the more complex a script gets, the fewer models are able or willing to complete it, and so this theme has only worked out a handful of times for me.

The other direction that a lot of my videos goes is the concept of the circumcised alpha male. This theme is a little easier to work with in an American setting, and typically involves a college student, nurse, masseuse, etc. that's a bit of a snob about what kind of cocks she likes (I call them "circumcise queens"). With these videos I'm usually able to provide pretty minimal instructions, because most models have no problem improvising around this theme.

I know these remarks don't directly answer your question, but I appreciate having someone else who understands how tricky it can be to put together an acucullophiliac story line. Just a single page of script usually takes me an hour or two to write, so I can't even imagine how long it must take for you to assemble your own vignettes.
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Re: Ingredients of a good acucullophiliac short story?

Postby Cufflinks » Sun Jan 28, 2018 1:29 pm

Gemlt wrote:Although I wouldn't really call it a coherent story, the concept of "Mr. Mogen" is essentially the reverse: a circumcised man traveling the world and enchanting the locals with his fantastic phallus.

Alternatively, I've worked a lot with the fantasy of being captured by enemies in some bygone era and being selected by their queen to serve as her "stud."

Thanks so much for your feedback!

What you mention here actually reminds me of the book "The Physician" by Noah Gordon. That is one writer I actually suspect to be one of us. He makes reference to circumcision so frequently, and creates so much of the story line around it, that it is pretty obvious. I haven't seen the film, but the original novel is clearly full of circ references along the lines as you describe.

Funny you should mention capture by enemies and becoming some queen's toy boy - I am actually currently mulling over exactly that as a story, since a member here suggested a historical context and a celebrity once. To answer your question regarding how long it takes me to write these stories: The actual write-up is actually pretty quick. Maybe an hour or two. But I usually have weeks and months of lead time where I build these things up in my head and try to come up with clear and powerful themes.
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Re: Ingredients of a good acucullophiliac short story?

Postby Gemlt » Sun Jan 28, 2018 2:18 pm

Interesting. I'll have to keep my eyes peeled for The Physician, and I'll definitely look forward to your upcoming story!
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Re: Ingredients of a good acucullophiliac short story?

Postby vanisl20 » Mon Jan 29, 2018 3:11 am

One of the things that makes good circ stories stand out for me are clear, vivid descriptions of the circumcised penis (ie. loose skin on the shaft, tight shaft, frenulum gone, etc). That's one of the reasons why I like your "magic circs" story so much - it so in detail describes the various styles of circumcision and how they effect sensation/sex. I also enjoy stories where a male is circumcised due to a females request (or demand).
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