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An English Teen, Circumcised in the USA

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An English Teen, Circumcised in the USA

Postby evadjams » Thu Apr 12, 2018 4:02 pm

I came across this super long form story, An English Teen, Circumcised in the USA, that I'd never seen before, and quite enjoyed a lot of it.

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Re: An English Teen, Circumcised in the USA

Postby Cufflinks » Fri Apr 13, 2018 2:24 am

That reads really well.
I like how he offsets thoughts in italics. Neat writing detail I might steal.
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Re: An English Teen, Circumcised in the USA

Postby Xochimilco » Fri Apr 13, 2018 6:44 pm

This is a lot to read but it starts off pretty well. Thanks for posting it!
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Re: An English Teen, Circumcised in the USA

Postby evadjams » Fri Apr 13, 2018 8:18 pm

Yeah, you kind of need to skim until you get to a good part (like anything that happens in the circ doctor's office). It's refreshing to have something substantial to read in the genre though.
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Re: An English Teen, Circumcised in the USA

Postby hardware » Fri Apr 13, 2018 10:14 pm

That is a little more than substantial!
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